Tuesday, September 26, 2023

For Writers & Screenwriters: 5 Secrets To Writing A Marketable Screenplay On The First Draft by Kathy Berardi (Guest Screenwriter)

Last night's presentation by Kathy Berardi, 5 Secrets To Writing A Marketable Screenplay On The First Draft, to my meetup.com group, Atlanta Screenwriters Anonymous, was highly informative. 


 

Kathy offers 5 easily actionable ideas that make a lot of sense from a commercial perspective. I'll be personally putting them into practice in my current and future scripts.

As promised during her talk, I've included a link to the presentation pdf file that gives an overview of her discussion points. Enjoy!

PDF file link

My meetup  group can be reached at:

Atlanta Screenwriters Anonymous link

Events are held online and also in person within the Atlanta metro area.

Wednesday, September 6, 2023

Trending Middle Grade Best Sellers Snapshot -- August 2023 (Novels, Graphic Novels, and Book Series)

Included in this post are lists from different sources to provide a snapshot of the most popular trending middle grade fiction (novels, graphic novels and book series) for August 2023.

Notably, Amazon accounts for some 60%-70% of US book sales, and dominates the marketplace. Therefore, books trending on other best seller lists should theoretically also show up somewhere on the various Amazon Most Sold listings.

Here are the lists below with the titles appearing on multiple lists highlighted:


Amazon's Best Children's Books of 2023 So Far: Ages 9 to 12

1) The Eyes and the Impossible
Dave Eggers, Shawn Harris Dave Eggers, Shawn Harris
Hardcover

2) Greenwild: The World Behind the Door (Greenwild, 1)
Pari Thomson
Hardcover

3) The Labors of Hercules Beal
Gary D. Schmidt
Hardcover

4) The One and Only Ruby
Katherine Applegate
Hardcover

5) Four Eyes: A Graphic Novel (Four Eyes #1)
Rex Ogle, Dave Valeza
Paperback

6) The Swifts: A Dictionary of Scoundrels
Beth Lincoln, Claire Powell
Hardcover

7) My Selma: True Stories of a Southern Childhood at the Height of the Civil Rights Movement
Willie Mae Brown
Hardcover

8) From the World of Percy Jackson: The Sun and the Star (Nico Di Angelo Adventures)
Rick Riordan and Mark Oshiro
Hardcover

9)  The Superteacher Project
Gordon Korman
Hardcover

10)  Finally Seen
Kelly Yang
Hardcover 

 Reference link

Amazon Charts
The Top 20 Most Sold & Most Read Books of the Week
Week of August 27, 2023


9)  We'll Always Have Summer
by Jenny Han
Kindle Unlimited
Ages: 12+

10)  The Summer I Turned Pretty
by Jenny Han
Kindle Unlimited
Ages" 12+

 Reference link

 
The New York Times
(R) Middle Grade Hardcover Best Seller List
Week of August 27, 2023

1) THE SUN AND THE STAR
by Rick Riordan and Mark Oshiro

2) REFUGEE
by Alan Gratz

3) WONDER
by R.J. Palacio

4) ODDER
by Katherine Applegate. Illustrated by Charles Santoso

5) THE SWIFTS
by Beth Lincoln. Illustrated by Claire Powell

6) TWO DEGREES
by Alan Gratz

7) SKANDAR AND THE UNICORN THIEF
by A.F. Steadman

8) WORST BROOMMATE EVER!
by Wanda Coven. Illustrated by Anna Abramskaya

9) GROUND ZERO (Historical Fiction)
by Alan Gratz

10) THE COMPLETE COOKBOOK FOR YOUNG CHEFS
(Non-Fiction)
by America's Test Kitchen Kids

Reference link

The New York Times(R) Middle Grade Paperback Best Seller List
July 2023
(Trailing one month)

1) A LONG WALK TO WATER
by Linda Sue Park

2) THE ONE AND ONLY IVAN
by Katherine Applegate. Illustrated by Patricia Castelao

3) RESTART
by Gordon Korman

4) OUT OF MY MIND
by Sharon M. Draper

5) FISH IN A TREE
by Lynda Mullaly Hunt

6) BROWN GIRL DREAMING
by Jacqueline Woodson

7) WISH
by Barbara O'Connor

8) THE CROSSOVER
by Kwame Alexander

9) A WOLF CALLED WANDER
by Rosanne Parry. Illustrated by Mónica Armiño

10) THE GIRL WHO DRANK THE MOON
by Kelly Barnhill

Reference link

From Barnes and Noble's Top 20 Bestselling Books

6) The Chalice of the Gods (B&N Exclusive Edition) (Percy Jackson and the Olympians)
by Rick Riordan

16) Hooky Volume 3 (Signed Book)
by Míriam Bonastre Tur, Míriam Bonastre Tur (Illustrator)

 Reference link

 

Summary 

-Two of the 12+ age intended Summer Series novels by Jenny Han made it on to Amazon's Most Sold and Read list (although not fully MG titles).

-Special edition middle grade books exclusive to Barnes and Noble appear to sell well on their platform as two middle grade series books made Barnes and Noble's Top 20 Bestsellers List.

 -Percy Jackson series books are reliably trending popular.

 





Tuesday, September 5, 2023

Lifeboat 12 by Susan Hood: Middle Grade Reviews from a Parent and Writer’s Perspective


 

Synopsis:

Ken Sparks, a thirteen-year-old English boy is selected to be evacuated from London to Canada during the Nazi’s horrific bombing campaign in the summer of 1940. He is among the ninety evacuee boys and girls considered “the lucky ones” by their parents and neighbors. During their fifth day at sea, the officers of their ship, The City of Benares, tell the children they have been saved. But events prove them wrong. Will Ken and his friends survive after a U-boat attack sets them adrift on a crowded lifeboat?

 


Author: Susan Hood
Published: 2019
Age Range: 10-13+

Pros and Cons:

Pros:

Evocative, figurative language is effectively used by author Susan Hood in the telling of the story and in the characterization of Ken, the thirteen-year-old protagonist.

The type setting of the text is laid out like a poetry book. The positioning, size and shape of the text changes to reflect the book’s mood and action. The effects are not as radical as you might imagine. Rather, the technique is used judiciously and to good effect, helping the story flow and adding a dynamic, active element to the words on the page.

A less poetic example of this would be “The Wimpy Kid Font” that is used in “The Wimpy Kid” series where the text looks like handwriting and reflects the attitude of the storyteller, and along with the cartoons, is a visual reflection of the action described on the page.

It’s a good introduction to poetic and figurative language for young readers. The writing is at an incrementally higher reading level than “gateway” books for reluctant readers.

This story is historical fiction with interesting background facts woven into the tale. We learn about a time period that contrasts sharply with the lifestyle and societal demands of today.

Strong emotional payoff and sentimental nostalgia from the true story and fictional elements in the book.

Cons:

Perhaps too much poetic language and war time conflict for readers just interested in enjoying an adventure sea story.

The emotional and dramatic ending may be too much for some younger readers and might be better handled when they are more emotionally mature.

Potentially Offensive Content:
Wartime WWII bombing is described. A sailor dies from drowning after jumping off Lifeboat 12, driven to madness after drinking too much saltwater. We learn in the historical background information that other passengers and crew were killed during the ship’s sinking or died in the hospital after being rescued.

A Worthwhile Read?

Absolutely! Lifeboat 12 is a highly engaging, emotionally evocative book by renowned author Susan Hood that will thrill and entertain young readers interested in fact-based adventure stories.

Also, I think Ken Spark’s story could be made into a worthwhile and entertaining movie for both children and adults.

 Reviewed by:

Christopher Sartorius

 

 

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